When a government spy is summoned to be regenerated, he goes into hiding and enlists the help of a phony policeman to assist him in taking back the Dewian government.
this sounds really interesting! it sounds like a lot of action would take place in this movie, just make sure you incorporate other aspects as well to keep people interested.
Okay, this one made me do a double take. What on earth is regeneration, and what does this mysterious Dewian nation need it for? I'm already wondering what is going on... successfully mysterious logline. I think the word "phony" is slightly too ambiguous here; where the others are intriguing, that word is more confusing. Is this a person pretending to be a policeman, a policeman who is always faking it, or is this another new term found only in the Dewian nation? Also, it may be nice to know from whom they're taking back the government (but that could equally well be left mysterious.) Clarify that, and I think this one's a winner.
Nice, sounds interesting, can't wait to read the script.
ReplyDeleteIt definitely sounds interesting and leaves me wondering what happened to the spy and what the 'phony policeman' is all about. :)
ReplyDeletethis sounds really interesting! it sounds like a lot of action would take place in this movie, just make sure you incorporate other aspects as well to keep people interested.
ReplyDeleteOkay, this one made me do a double take. What on earth is regeneration, and what does this mysterious Dewian nation need it for? I'm already wondering what is going on... successfully mysterious logline. I think the word "phony" is slightly too ambiguous here; where the others are intriguing, that word is more confusing. Is this a person pretending to be a policeman, a policeman who is always faking it, or is this another new term found only in the Dewian nation? Also, it may be nice to know from whom they're taking back the government (but that could equally well be left mysterious.) Clarify that, and I think this one's a winner.
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